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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.132

Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 132
It is often believed by many that to check the compatibility between partners, they should live together. However, others think that due to this, people indulge in unethical activities and only the emotional attachment is a factor which ensures that relationship will be long lasting. In my opinion, partners must spend quality time before marriage and sentimental attachments along with trust on the other person are necessary for a durable connection. There is an increase trend of living together before marriage, in order to develop understanding. Everyone has habits which are dear to them, but it is quite irritating for others. As an illustration, my friend lived with her to be husband for four months and found out that they cannot accept the differences, present between them. Hence, partners must spend quality time with each other to avoid problems in the future. The factor which is necessary for the durability of the relationship is emotional attachment. The relationship growth depends on the positive sentiments towards a person. The emotional attachment predicts the outcome of a couple dreams. Furthermore, the trust of a person is mandated for strong family connections. It is the base of a happy family and it ensures the ultimate happiness in the afterlife of the couples. Therefore, the positive feelings and a trust over partner is crucial for the durable alliance To conclude, many believe in order to understand each other and to check the compatibility, partners must live together before the wedding. Owing to this, people tend to involve themselves in immoral acts and only the emotional attachment defines the durability of a relation. In my view, a specific amount of time must be spent before the marriage, emotional attachment and trust are needed for long lasting relations.
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often
believed by
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many
that to
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check
the compatibility between
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partners
, they should
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live
together.
However
, others
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think
that due to this,
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people
indulge in unethical activities and
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only
the
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emotional
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attachment
is a factor which ensures that relationship will be
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
long lasting
. In my opinion,
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partners
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
spend quality time
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before
marriage and sentimental
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attachments
along with
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trust
on the
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other
person are necessary for a durable connection.

There is an increase trend of living together
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before
marriage, in order to develop understanding. Everyone has habits which are dear to them,
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but
it is quite irritating for others. As an illustration, my friend
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lived
with her to be
Consider using a past participle here: "husbanded".
husband
for four months and found out that they cannot accept the differences, present between them.
Hence
,
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partners
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
spend quality time with each
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other
to avoid problems in the future.

The factor which is necessary for the durability of the relationship is
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emotional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
attachment
. The relationship growth depends on the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
sentiments towards a person.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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emotional
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attachment
predicts the outcome of a couple dreams.
Furthermore
, the
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trust
of a person
is mandated
for strong family connections. It is the base of a happy family and it ensures the ultimate happiness in the afterlife of the couples.
Therefore
, the
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positive
feelings and a
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trust
over
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partner
is crucial for the durable alliance

To conclude
,
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many
believe in order to understand each
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other
and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the compatibility,
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partners
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
together
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before
the wedding. Owing to this,
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people
tend to involve themselves in immoral acts and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
emotional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
attachment
defines the durability of a relation. In my view, a specific amount of time
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be spent
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before
the marriage,
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emotional
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attachment
and
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trust
are needed
for
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
long lasting
relations.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 132

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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