These days, the number of species on the verge of extinction is progressively increasing. While some people believe that more funds should be allocated to protect them, others think that the money could be utilized for more pressing issues. This essay will discuss why useful money should not be spent wastefully on endangered breeds.
As much as the government is trying its best to look out for endangered species, some people are still of the opinion that enough is not spent in this course. They believe that they have rights to live freely without feeling threatened, even though they cannot speak for themselves. Also, they are very important part of the ecosystem. In zoology department of the University of Lagos, for instance, a proposal was made to the government to allocate 5% of the National budget to protect endangered species. For these reasons they think more money should be spent on them.
Conversely, I am of the opinion that human life is paramount to any other thing, and every measure should be taken to assure survival. There are other essential sectors that require funds, such as; health, education and so on. The health and education sector most especially are lagging behind and a lot of lives are lost daily due to the lack of hospitals, equipment and staff. In a study carried out recently it was revealed that over 1000 people die daily as a result of common and treatable diseases. This is to show that focusing more attention on this aspect will increase the life span of humans.
In conclusion, the money spent on protecting endangered breeds is just enough for them and attention should be shifted to more pressing issues.
These days, the number of species on the verge of extinction is
progressively
increasing. While
some
people
believe that more funds should
be allocated
to protect them, others
think
that the
money
could
be utilized
for more pressing issues. This essay will discuss why useful
money
should not be
spent
wastefully
on
endangered
breeds.
As much as the
government
is trying its best to look out for
endangered
species,
some
people
are
still
of the opinion that
enough
is not
spent
in this course. They believe that they have rights to
live
freely
without feeling threatened,
even though
they cannot speak for themselves.
Also
, they are
very
important
part of the ecosystem. In zoology department of the University of Lagos,
for instance
, a proposal
was made
to the
government
to allocate 5% of the National budget to protect
endangered
species. For these reasons they
think
more
money
should be
spent
on them.
Conversely
, I am of the opinion that human life is paramount to any other thing, and every measure should
be taken
to assure survival. There are other essential sectors that require funds, such as; health, education and
so
on. The health and education sector most
especially
are lagging behind and
a lot of
lives
are lost
daily due to the lack of hospitals, equipment and staff. In a study carried out recently it
was revealed
that over 1000
people
die
daily
as a result
of common and treatable diseases. This is to
show
that focusing more attention on this aspect will increase the life span of humans.
In conclusion
, the
money
spent
on protecting
endangered
breeds is
just
enough
for them and attention should
be shifted
to more pressing issues.
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