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Do u agree or disagree with the following. Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use the specific examples and reasons to support your answer. v.1

Do u agree or disagree with the following. Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use the specific examples and reasons to support your answer. v. 1
is it prudent to say that life at the time of our grandparents was easy? Two different perspective emerge while meticulously evaluating this issue. one perspective answers the aforementioned question with utmost conviction whereas, others makes its disapproval evident by denying its presence. personally I have proclivity towards thought that life today is much easier than before. it is due to main reasons. First is sourses of knowledge and other one is availability of means of locomotion. my grandmother-teaching in school was interested in research. To get a bit of knowledge she needed to read lot and to contact her guide she used to send letters via post. time required to get answer as well as solutions from guide was huge. Either waiting or finding solution herself were her options. today we can just google any information by using keywords only. Furthermore e-mails are quick ways to contact any person from any corner of the world. if she had this technology, she would have done better research in short time. Secondly, In past technology was not much advanced, resulted in many problems although at that time it might not be big problem but if today after facing such situations we might not survive for long. my gandpa once told me that he must walk 6 km daily to reach his school and this route was passing by a small river. In rainy seasons he faced a problem to go to school. In contrary today we avoided this situation by developing roads and different vehicles. No student had to walk this much and miss his school. this simple solution eased our life. Last but not least, in situations like natural disasters like flood and tsunami advanced vehicles like helicopter and boats are being used to help to sufferer. many other things like trade via Internet, discovery of computer as well as online banking avoiding long lines made our life easier. after this holistic analysis hence in conclusion, we can say that our life is way better than our grand parents.
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life
at the time of our grandparents was easy? Two
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perspective emerge while
meticulously
evaluating this issue.
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its disapproval evident by denying its presence.
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personally
I have proclivity towards
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thought
that
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life
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today
is much easier than
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before
.
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it
is due to main reasons.
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of knowledge and other one is availability of means of locomotion.

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my
grandmother-teaching in
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school
was interested
in research. To
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get
a bit of knowledge she needed to read lot and to contact her guide she
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used
to
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send
letters via post.
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time
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get
answer
as well
as solutions from guide was huge. Either waiting or finding solution herself were her options.
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today
we can
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google any information by using keywords
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.
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if
she had this technology, she would have done better research in short time.

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many
problems although at that time it might not be
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big
problem
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if
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today
after facing such situations we might not survive for long.
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my
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once
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me that he
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must
walk 6 km daily to reach his
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school
and this route was passing by a
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small
river. In rainy seasons he faced a problem to go to
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school
. In contrary
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today
we avoided this situation by developing roads and
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different
vehicles. No student had to walk this much and miss his
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school
.
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this
simple solution
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eased
our life.

Last
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but
not least, in situations like natural disasters like flood and tsunami advanced vehicles like helicopter and boats are being
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used
to
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help
to sufferer.
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many
other things like trade via Internet, discovery of computer
as well
as online banking avoiding long lines made our
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life
easier.

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after
this holistic analysis
hence
in conclusion
, we can say that our
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life
is way better than our grand parents.
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IELTS essay Do u agree or disagree with the following. Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use the specific examples and reasons to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
339 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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