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Do this writing task. Include some serious and some less serious ideas, and use some of the phrases and structures in exercises 3 and 4. Follow the writing plan below.

Do this writing task. Include some serious and some less serious ideas, and use some of the phrases and structures in exercises 3 and 4. Follow the writing plan below. m2wdn
If I were to rule the world, the first thing I’d do is provide homeless people in developing countries with a place to live and a job. That, in my opinion is one of the most serious issues we face. I'd make it a point to see them lying on the sidewalks every time I went out at night. In the winter, they all want a small house to keep them warm in the cold and windy weather, as well as a job to help them earn a living. I’d also make factories reduce the amount of pollution they produce. because the discharge of substances is seriously polluting the environment for animals and plants. The next thing I’d do is make book available for free. In my opinion reading can really help your education, so making books free would simply allow kids to read more without having to worry about the costs. I also engage in some less serious activities. I would outlaw the production of alcoholic beverages, such as beer, because when we drink, we are unaware of our own actions. It's terrible, in my opinion. Finally, I would make smokers stop smoking because it is extremely harmful to their health.
If I were to
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rule
the world, the
first
thing I’d do is provide homeless
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people
in
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developing countries
with a place to
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live
and a job. That, in my opinion is one of the most serious issues we face. I'd
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make
it a point to
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see
them lying on the sidewalks every time I went out at night. In the winter, they all want a
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small
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house
to
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keep
them warm in the
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cold
and windy weather,
as well
as a job to
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help
them earn a living. I’d
also
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make
factories
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reduce
the amount of pollution they produce.
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because
the discharge of substances is
seriously
polluting the environment for animals and plants.

The
next
thing I’d do is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
book available for free. In my opinion reading can
really
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help
your education,
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so
making books free would
simply
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allow
kids to read more without having to worry about the costs.

I
also
engage in
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some
less serious activities. I would outlaw the production of alcoholic beverages, such as beer,
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because
when we drink, we are unaware of our
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own
actions. It's terrible, in my opinion.
Finally
, I would
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make
smokers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
smoking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it is
extremely
harmful to their health.

IELTS essay Do this writing task. Include some serious and some less serious ideas, and use some of the phrases and structures in exercises 3 and 4. Follow the writing plan below.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
202 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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