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Do sports stars get paid too much money? Why or why not?

Do sports stars get paid too much money? Why or why not? q185w

It is believed that sports are seen as social cohesion. And sports strars get paid too much money. The first reason is that their salary frequently does not correspond to their contribution. Many sportsmen have huge incomes, because they play in trendy sports clubs, such as Manchester United or Real Madrid, but in fact, unlike miners and teachers, they do little for economic growth. Another factor is that their wages causes outrages in society. Many employees have the average salary, which is enough to lead a modest life, but when they see how much sportsmen earn, they feel resentment to such enormous injustice.

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 that sports are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 as social cohesion. And sports Possible spelling mistake found.starsstrapsstrawsstraysSTARS
strars
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 paid too much money. The first
 reason is that their salary frequently
 does not correspond to their contribution. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 sportsmen have huge incomes, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they play in trendy sports clubs, such as Manchester United or Real Madrid, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in fact, unlike miners and teachers, they do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 for economic growth. Another factor is that their wages causes outrages in society. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 employees have the average salary, which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to lead a modest life, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 how much sportsmen earn, they feel resentment to such enormous injustice. 