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Do computers think It isn t a new question In fact Alan Turing a British mathematician proposed an experiment to answer the question in 1950 and the test known as the Turing test is still used today In the experiment a group of people are asked to interac

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The reading passage gives us some information about the Turing Test. The text share with us the premises on which it is based, the procedure of the test and criteria of the success. Alan Turing surmised that his test is able to answer on the question whereas a computer can think or not. At the same time, the lecturer asserts that other scientist believes that the Turing test is meaningless because of reasons which are given in detail below. Firstly, a possibility exists that a computer may be designed in such a way that it can deceive a person who checks the machine's intelligence through creation a huge data base of possible answers. Consequently, a machine may pass the test even if it is not able to think. Secondly, it is quite probable that a human being may not pass the test, in case the participants of the experiment belong to different cultures and speak in distinct languages. In this case, there is needed a common context which will allow them to understand each other. Finally, although no computer system or machine has ever passed the Turing test, it is highly questionably to believe that passing it will prove that the computer can think. The crucial reason of this situation is that the test is based on measuring one's behavior rathen than on paying attention to process of thinking. As a result, a machine can pass the test and a man can faild it. Thus, the Turing test is meaningless.
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Test
. The text share with us the premises on which it
is based
, the procedure of the
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test
and criteria of the success. Alan Turing surmised that his
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test
is able to answer on the question whereas a computer can
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think
or not. At the same time, the lecturer asserts that other scientist believes that the Turing
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test
is meaningless
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of reasons which are
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even if it is not able to
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Finally
, although no computer system or machine has ever passed the Turing
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think
. The crucial reason of this situation is that the
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is based
on measuring one's behavior
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than on paying attention to process of thinking.
As a result
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and a
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IELTS essay Do computers think It isn t a new question In fact Alan Turing a British mathematician proposed an experiment to answer the question in 1950 and the test known as the Turing test is still used today In the experiment a group of people are asked to interac

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