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The reading is proposed the attitude about uselessly of the athanol and impossibility of replacing that with gasoline, and privides three reasons for that.

The reading is proposed the attitude about uselessly of the athanol and impossibility of replacing that with gasoline, and privides three reasons for that. m156L
The reading is proposed the attitude about uselessly of the athanol and impossibility of replacing that with gasoline, and privides three reasons for that. On the other hand, the lecturer is completely disagree with this idea and believes that athanol can be a good alternative for gasoline and consequently opposes arguments of the author. First, the reading states that using athanol in cars will release carbon dioxide, just like gasoline and will cause to global warming. However the professor refutes this idea by stating that using ethanole will not cause to generation of carbon dioxcide. She mentions that, even though ir produces carbon dioxcide, considering that ethanol is made by corn and our knowledge about the mechanism of plants lives which attracts carbon dioxide and releases oxigen. Surprisingly demand to productopn more corn for ethanol will cause to attracting more carbon dioxide and releasing more oxigen which perevents global warming. Second, the passage avers that, due to usage of corns for making athanol their will be less food for animals like caw. On the contrary the lecturer claims that, athanol is made from the parts of the plants which are not eating by animales. So that the production of ethanol will not lead to shortage of food for animales. Ultimately, the article contents that, ethanol fuel never can compete with gasoline because production of that is very expensive. However the professor rejects this attitude by mentioning that, eventhough now the production expenses of ethanol is high but after increasing demand to using that which will lead to more production of ethanol, due to producting more amount the final price will drop. She states that with producting ethanol three times more than now, the price for each unit will drop by 40%. So that this fuel will be cheap and can compete with gasoline.
The reading
is proposed
the attitude about
uselessly
of the
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athanol
and impossibility of replacing that with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gasoline
, and
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privides
three reasons for that.
On the other hand
, the lecturer is completely
Consider using a past participle here: "disagreed".
disagree
with this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
and believes that
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athanol
can be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
alternative for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gasoline
and
consequently
opposes arguments of the author.

First
, the reading states that using
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athanol
in cars will release
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
carbon
dioxide,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
like
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gasoline
and will cause to global warming.
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However
the professor refutes this
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idea
by stating that using
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ethanole
will not cause to generation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
carbon
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dioxcide
. She mentions that,
even though
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ir
produces
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carbon
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dioxcide
, considering that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
is made
by corn and our knowledge about the mechanism of plants
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
which attracts
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
carbon
dioxide and releases
Possible spelling mistake found.
oxigen
.
Surprisingly
demand to
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productopn
more corn for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
will cause to attracting more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
carbon
dioxide and releasing more
Possible spelling mistake found.
oxigen
which
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perevents
global warming.

Second, the passage avers that, due to usage of corns for making
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athanol
their will be less food for animals like caw.
On the contrary
the lecturer claims that,
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athanol
is made
from the parts of the plants which are not eating by
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animales
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
will not lead to shortage of food for
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "animals", the plural form of the noun 'animal'?
animales
.

Ultimately
, the article contents that,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
fuel never can compete with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gasoline
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
of
that is
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very
expensive.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
the professor rejects this attitude by mentioning that,
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eventhough
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
expenses of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
is high
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
after increasing demand to using that which will lead to more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
, due to
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producting
more amount the final price will drop. She states that with
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producting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ethanol
three times more than
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, the price for each unit will drop by 40%.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
that this fuel will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
and can compete with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gasoline
.
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IELTS essay The reading is proposed the attitude about uselessly of the athanol and impossibility of replacing that with gasoline, and privides three reasons for that.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
303 words
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