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Reading Time: 3 minutes Space Tourism Soon there will be something new for the tourist who has been everywhere and seen everything on Earth. Spacecraft being developed by private commercial companies will soon enable private citizens to buy their own tic

Reading Time: 3 minutes Space Tourism Soon there will be something new for the tourist who has been everywhere and seen everything on Earth. Spacecraft being developed by private commercial companies will soon enable private citizens to buy their own tic g58yA

The article states that the privatized spaceflight industry will bring great benefits for both science and the public, and provides three reasons for that. But the professor is not in the same idea and avers that privat industry of spaceflight will have no advantages neither for science nor for public and opposes each reasons of the author. First, the passage claims that privat space travel will make the expences of space exploration cheaper than now. However the professor refutes this point by stating that, having a privat space travel need to a complicated space traffic controlers, which makes cast and also because of the importance of safty of travelers, creators need to several steps of testing of their equipments and it is expensive too. Secondly, the author concerned that privat companies will help to acceleration of scientific researches. On the other hand the lecturer thinks that it is not a sound idea and in fact it will prevent from more scientific discoveries, she explains that because of the high income in privt companis the reaserchers will work there and consequently due to the business goals of the privat companies the researchers are not motivated to work on research projects as well as in government companies. Finally, the paper claims that privatized industry will save people's tax and public will be beneficiary. In the contrary the lecturer mentions that because of the huge expenses of building space stations or space airports even with taking money from customers the privat companies will need to public tax to complate their operations and finally people have to pay more tax.

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