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In todayʼs modern life, where the air pollution is rapidly on the verge to worse, one of the vital issues is that numerous inhabitants consider that natural problems should be decided on a worldwide scale while another trust it is better to rise massive with them nationally. One of the main problem is that, a number of habits suppose clean the air, therefore, people will breathe pure air in the near future. The critic argument give favour of nature is that against, the government should be imposed the tax for wastes, that is why, nations cannot throw the rubbish to the clean yard. In this essay there will be discussed on more damage to surrounding rather than help to circumfence. In the first place, our planet is getting pollution and dirtier by everything. On of the main damage is person. Due to the fact that, all pull eats the fast food or drink something, since, per step is full with waste. All knows, these kind of fast foods or beverages have got plastic labels. When people open the foods or drinks, they throw the garbages to the land. On the contrary, there are numerous bins are put to land by government, however, everybody be lazy. For example, of they put their rubbish to the bin, the earth will not messy. In the second place, the second vital issue is smokes. The fumes are lead to both inhabitants and circle. Every industries and firms are bulit by government on developed countries, whether, these country's mass cause to illness. In spite of, per farms realize a smoke, nonetheless, numerous industries are bulit by people. If nations stop build a new and high houses, the nature will pure. For instance, the tax is imposed to people by heads. Nevertheless, every person throw their rubbish to land. Lastly, in my opinion, all developed and developing countries will finish to construct new buildings for three or four year, or the companies will stop produce a new car, on the contrary, the government will limit drive a car. On the result of this occasion, our air and planet will clean these years. After that, all person can drive scar, produce a automobile, and utilize a industries. Summarize the main points humans must begin to protect the nature like animals. Owing to, nature is our great wealth when we lost this wealth, the life must be over. A number of people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.
In
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todayʼs
modern life, where the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
air
pollution is
rapidly
on the verge to worse, one of the vital issues is that numerous inhabitants consider that natural problems should
be decided
on a worldwide scale while another trust it is better to rise massive with them
nationally
. One of the main problem is that, a number of habits suppose clean the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
air
,
therefore
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
will breathe pure
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
air
in the near future. The critic argument give
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favour
of
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nature
is that against, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
should
be imposed
the tax for wastes,
that is
why, nations cannot throw the rubbish to the clean yard. In this essay there will
be discussed
on more damage to surrounding
rather
than
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to
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circumfence
. In the
first
place, our planet is getting pollution and dirtier by everything. On of the main damage is person. Due to the fact that, all pull eats the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
food or drink something, since, per step is
The usual collocation for "full" is "of" not "with". Did you mean "full of"?
full with
waste. All knows,
Did you mean "this kind" or "these kinds"?
these kind
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
foods or beverages have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
plastic labels. When
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
open the foods or drinks, they throw the
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garbages
to the land.
On the contrary
, there are numerous bins
are put
to land by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
,
however
, everybody
The pronoun 'everybody' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "is", "was", "were".
be
lazy.
For example
, of they put their rubbish to the bin, the earth will not messy. In the second place, the second vital issue is smokes. The fumes are lead to both inhabitants and circle. Every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "industry"?
industries
and firms are
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bulit
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developed countries
, whether, these
Incorrect plural form; it does not need any apostrophe. Did you mean "countrys"?
country's
mass cause to illness.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
In spite of
, per farms realize a smoke, nonetheless, numerous industries are
Possible spelling mistake found.
bulit
by
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people
. If nations
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
build a new and high
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nature
will pure.
For instance
, the tax
is imposed
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
by heads.
Nevertheless
, every person throw their rubbish to land.
Lastly
, in my opinion, all developed and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developing countries
will
The verb 'finish' is used with the gerund form: "finish constructing".
finish to construct
new buildings for three or four year, or the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
produce a new car,
on the contrary
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
will limit drive a car. On the result of this occasion, our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
air
and planet will clean these years. After that, all person can drive scar, produce
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
automobile, and utilize
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a industry" or simply "industries"?
a industries
. Summarize the main points humans
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
to protect the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nature
like animals. Owing to,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nature
is our great wealth when we lost this wealth, the life
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be over. A number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that environmental problems should
be solved
on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them
nationally
.
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IELTS essay Discussion essay. . . . . . . . . .

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
426 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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