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the advantages of education

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Knowledge is power. Education is one of the most vital human needs today. Without a doubt, we can say it is a necessary tool for acquiring the essential and basic knowledge and skills and is much more than learning from books and passing exams. Education helps us to improve our knowledge and our lifestyle. With education, we could transfer the legacy of our older generation into our children. This legacy includes the knowledge and experience that we can build incredible lives for ourselves and our children. Our life is changing, and living is getting difficult every day, so it is indispensable to teach various things and raise an intelligent generation that can understand and solve them in a suitable way. Education is our guide to better understanding the world around us, and we have this opportunity to learn, find new things, identify them, and finally improve our knowledge. It is a gift of knowledge that can bring us to the heights of our dreams. Apart from making us acquire the necessary knowledge and make our dreams come true, education is also base on humanism, freedom, equality, democracy, and human rights. There is no question that education is the most vital weapon against ignorance. People learn the basic norms, rules, regulations, and values of society through education. Besides, with our knowledge, we can help others learn, and we can also break taboos and ultimately create a world of freedom, democracy, and human rights. Apart from all this, revolutionary education is to eliminate racial differences and is a weapon that makes humans more civilized and brings peace to the world. Our life is a process of learning and creating helpful and new things for the world around us. We must remember that good education is necessary today it is the foundation of our future success we can achieve our dreams if only we work hard for them and also believe in the value of education, and recognize that our education is worth the investment.
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. Without a doubt, we can say it is a necessary tool for acquiring the essential and basic
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knowledge
and
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skills
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Education
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helps
us to
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knowledge
and our lifestyle.

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education
, we could transfer the legacy of our older generation into our children. This legacy includes the
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knowledge
and experience that we can build incredible
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lives
for ourselves and our children. Our life is changing, and living is getting difficult every day,
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it is indispensable to teach various things and raise an intelligent generation that can understand and solve them
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is our guide to better understanding the world around us, and we have this opportunity to learn, find new things, identify them, and
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that can bring us to the heights of our dreams.

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human
rights. There is no question that
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is the most vital weapon against ignorance.
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People
learn the basic norms,
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rules
, regulations, and values of society through
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education
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knowledge
, we can
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help
others learn, and we can
also
break taboos and
ultimately
create a world of freedom, democracy, and
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human
rights. Apart from all this, revolutionary
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education
is to eliminate racial differences and is a weapon that
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makes
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humans
more civilized and brings peace to the world.

Our life is a process of learning and creating helpful and new things for the world around us. We
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remember that
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it is the foundation of our future success we can achieve our dreams if
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, and recognize that our
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is worth the investment.
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IELTS essay the advantages of education

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
332 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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