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Discuss why the student wants to see the Professor and the possible solutions to his problems in detail. v.1

Discuss why the student wants to see the Professor and the possible solutions to his problems in detail. v. 1
Nowadays, with the implementation of high technology-gadgets, improving children's penmanship, legibility, pencil grasp, and working on problem areas are all important things that need to be addressed. So, I do agree that, the parents should force the child to write by hand. Firstly, handwriting is so important because, it is on show to others and may be used to make judgments about us. Visual-motor skills, such as eye-hand coordination, are associated with academic achievement. Scientists have found that, developing fine motor skills in early childhood can predict not only writing success, but better performance in reading and math in elementary school. The rise of technology led to the fall of cursive handwriting. This is especially in the digital age, when most of our written communication is done through texting on mobile devices or typing on a keyboard. Voice recognition software has even evolved which made it easier. Secondly, handwriting activates the brain more than typing on keyboard because it involves more complex motor and cognitive skills. Nevertheless, calligraphy is a predictor of success in other subjects, because good scripting has a positive impact on grades. Thus, cursive writing helps students, both young and old, with dyslexia. Studies proved that, handwriting and signature can predict one’s character. There were hand writing competitions held at places. To wind up, good handwriting has several benefits- improve writing skills, boost confidence, personality development. So, me being a parent, will definitely force my child to develop a long hand practice, which will be beneficial for him. I prefer every parent to help their child to practice good penmanship for their own better brighter future.
Nowadays, with the implementation of high technology-gadgets, improving children's penmanship, legibility, pencil grasp, and working on problem areas are all
important
things that need to
be addressed
.
So
, I do
agree
that, the parents should force the child to write by hand.

Firstly
,
handwriting
is
so
important
because
, it is on
show
to others and may be
used
to
make
judgments about us. Visual-motor
skills
, such as eye-hand coordination,
are associated
with academic achievement. Scientists have found that, developing fine motor
skills
in early childhood can predict not
only
writing
success,
but
better performance in reading and math in elementary school. The rise of technology led to the fall of cursive
handwriting
. This is
especially
in the digital age, when most of our written communication
is done
through texting on mobile devices or typing on a keyboard. Voice recognition software has even evolved which made it easier.

Secondly
,
handwriting
activates the brain more than typing on keyboard
because
it involves more complex motor and cognitive
skills
.
Nevertheless
, calligraphy is a predictor of success in other subjects,
because
good
scripting has a
positive
impact on grades.
Thus
, cursive
writing
helps
students, both young and
old
, with dyslexia. Studies proved that,
handwriting
and signature can predict one’s character. There were hand
writing
competitions held at places.

To wind up,
good
handwriting
has several benefits-
improve
writing
skills
, boost confidence, personality development.
So
, me being a parent, will definitely force my child to develop a long hand practice, which will be beneficial for him. I prefer every parent to
help
their child to practice
good
penmanship for their
own
better brighter future.
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IELTS essay Discuss why the student wants to see the Professor and the possible solutions to his problems in detail. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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