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Discuss which is your favourite room and why?

Discuss which is your favourite room and why? ew9np

For me, my favourite room is my bedroom, where I grew up. My bedroom walls are painted blue and have an attached washroom. There is a TV on the front wall of my bed. The reasons I prefer my bedroom the most are that First and foremost reason is that It's the room where I spend most of the time. There are lots of moments attached to this room. I remember a day when I was in 5th standard; that day was my birthday, no one in my family wished me, so I thought that they had forgotten about my day, but when I returned from school, they organised a surprise party in my room. That's the most memorable day for me. Furthermore, I have complete control over my bedroom and can do whatever I want, which means that I can arrange and put up the things just as I want. Moreover, I have decorated my room walls with lovely paintings and family pictures.

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, I have decorated my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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 walls with lovely paintings and family pictures. 