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Discuss when, if ever, capital punishment can be viewed as a valid punishment for crime.

Discuss when, if ever, capital punishment can be viewed as a valid punishment for crime. YPVK
In some countries still exsist death penalty as a punishment for major crimes. In this essay I will discuss about this and provide logical conclusion. Sometimes society is scared by criminals with death, explosion and global terror. Unfortunately, they not only post a threat to people but also relieze their evil ideas. There are some this kind of people who can kill humans as easy as animals, even worse. Such kind of crimes require suitable penalty. For instance, the hero of the soap-opera “Prision break” Lincoln Borrows put in prision due to killing one of the governers. On the other hand, people cause to human death by mistake. They do not want to do this. Occasionaly, this type of criminals ignore rules which might cause serious car accidents, for example. However, it is not worth to punish with death those peoples who are very sorry about they did. They should be given a chance to continue their life correctly. A majority of countries remove from their constitution the law about capital punishment. Even though, I consider that this sort of punishment should be in every country. Since weakness of law cause even worse damages if we continue liberalizing of rules. Furthermore this might effect on decreasing the number of crimes. In conclusion, I can say we need capital punishment but not always and not all types of crime. We can built peace society only thanks to our strong juridical system.
In
some
countries
still
exsist
death penalty as a
punishment
for major crimes. In this essay I will
discuss about this
and provide logical conclusion.

Sometimes
society
is scared
by criminals with death, explosion and global terror. Unfortunately, they not
only
post a threat to
people
but
also
relieze
their evil
ideas
. There are
some
this
kind
of
people
who can kill humans as easy as animals, even worse. Such kind of crimes require suitable penalty.
For instance
, the hero of the soap-opera “
Prision
break” Lincoln Borrows put in
prision
due to killing one of the
governers
.

On the other hand
,
people
cause to human death by mistake. They do not want to do this.
Occasionaly
, this type of criminals
ignore
rules
which might cause serious car accidents,
for example
.
However
, it is not worth to punish with death those
peoples
who are
very
sorry about they did. They should be
given
a chance to continue their life
correctly
.

A majority of countries remove from their constitution the law about capital
punishment
.
Even though
, I consider that this sort of
punishment
should be in every country. Since weakness of law cause even worse damages if we continue liberalizing of
rules
.
Furthermore
this might
effect
on decreasing the number of crimes.

In conclusion
, I can say we need capital
punishment
but
not always and not all types of crime. We can
built
peace society
only
thanks to our strong juridical system.
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IELTS essay Discuss when, if ever, capital punishment can be viewed as a valid punishment for crime.

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