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discuss several hypotheses that blame the decline of the yellow cedars

discuss several hypotheses that blame the decline of the yellow cedars BX6j
Both the reading passage and lecture discuss several hypotheses that blame the decline of the yellow cedars. The reading passage argues that there are three reasons for not supporting ethanol fuel. On the contrary, the lecture refutes each of these points. First, the author of the passage claims that yellow-cedar decline may be caused by insect parasites, especially the cedar bark beetle. However, the lecture contends that these trees are resistant to insects. So healthy cedars are not suffering from insects. Secondly, the reading passage states that brown beers sometimes claw at the cedars instead of eating the tree bark with high sugar content. On the other hand, the lecturer mentions that bears are not the main cause of the overall population decline. For example, there is cedars decline in some places like islands where there are not any bears. In third, the article mentioned that gradual climate changes are the causes of this problem. In contrast, the listening mentions that we expect more cedars decline in higher elevations than lower elevations. Because we expect freezing damage of cedars in higher elevation and weather is cold over there. But more trees are damaged in the warm weather.
Both the reading
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passage
and lecture discuss several hypotheses that blame the
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decline
of the yellow
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cedars
. The reading
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passage
argues that there are three reasons for not supporting ethanol fuel.
On the contrary
, the lecture refutes each of these points.

First
, the author of the
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passage
claims that yellow-cedar
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decline
may
be caused
by insect parasites,
especially
the
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cedar
bark beetle.
However
, the lecture contends that these trees are resistant to insects.
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So
healthy
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cedars
are not suffering from insects.

Secondly
, the reading
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passage
states that brown beers
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sometimes
claw at the
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cedars
instead
of eating the tree bark with high sugar content.
On the other hand
, the lecturer mentions that bears are not the main cause of the
overall
population
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decline
.
For example
, there is
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cedars
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decline
in
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some
places like islands where there are not any bears.

In third, the article mentioned that gradual climate
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changes
are the causes of this problem.
In contrast
, the listening mentions that we
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expect
more
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cedars
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decline
in higher elevations than lower elevations.
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Because
we
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expect
freezing
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damage of
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cedars
in higher elevation and weather is
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cold
over there.
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But
more trees
are damaged
in the warm weather.
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IELTS essay discuss several hypotheses that blame the decline of the yellow cedars

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  American English
4 paragraphs
197 words
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