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DISCUSS BOTH THE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

DISCUSS BOTH THE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION m2YRr
At 21th century, air pollution is one of the reasons of the global warming that is why most people believe that they see car - free days as this problem’s solution all around the world however more people assert there are an efficiency ways to abridge it. In my opinion not only car free days but also some causes can be a suitable solution for air pollution Body Paragraph 1 Those people who are in favour of this method of diminishing of air pollution argue that it helps to abate the degree of different sorts of pollutants around environment. Nowadays cars are considered the main source of pollution round the world. Government should make laws for car-free days once in a month furthermore aggrandizing of public transports’ traffic may cause to get a good result. Additionally bicycling can also give people good opportunity in order to protect air pollution. For instance Singapore solved this problem through as I said above some reasons I think these kinds of mind may be an appropriate solution to shorten air pollution over the world Body Paragraph 2 On the other hand, more people assert we have other alternatives of ways so as to keep the environment from air pollution. Electrocars are one of efficiency ways to condense the an alarming and detrimental results because these sorts of cars are considered an ecologic clean. That is why most developed countries always try to use electro vehicles for saving fresh air and environment like countries of Scandinavian. In addition to humans must responsibility for keeping air from harmful smoke and variety of gases that is to say they should walk or ride bicycles more. These activities are not only useful for air but also they help them to keep fit and save their health Conclusion To sum up I personally tend to agree these concerns. I think all types of solution are crucial to conserve air for the generation of future
At
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21th
century,
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air
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pollution
is one of the reasons of the global warming
that is
why most
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people
believe that they
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see
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car
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-
free days as this problem’s
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solution
all around the world
however
more
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people
assert there are an efficiency ways to abridge it. In my opinion not
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only
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car
free days
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but
also
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some
causes can be a suitable
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solution
for
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air
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pollution


Body Paragraph 1

Those
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people
who are in
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favour
of this method of diminishing of
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air
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pollution
argue that it
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helps
to abate the degree of
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different
sorts of pollutants around environment. Nowadays
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cars
are considered
the main source of
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pollution
round the world.
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Government
should
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make
laws for car-free days once in a month
furthermore
aggrandizing of public transports’ traffic may cause to
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get
a
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good
result.
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Additionally
bicycling can
also
give
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people
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good
opportunity in order to protect
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air
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pollution
.
For instance
Singapore solved this problem through as I said above
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some
reasons I
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think
these kinds of mind may be an appropriate
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solution
to shorten
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air
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pollution
over the
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world


Body Paragraph 2

On the other hand
, more
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people
assert we have other alternatives of ways
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so as to
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keep
the environment from
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air
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pollution
.
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Electrocars
are one of efficiency ways to condense
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the an
alarming and detrimental results
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because
these sorts of
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cars
are considered
an ecologic clean.
That is
why most
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developed countries
always try to
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use
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electro
vehicles for saving fresh
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air
and environment like countries of Scandinavian.
In addition
to humans
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must
responsibility for keeping
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air
from harmful smoke and variety of gases
that is
to say they should walk or ride bicycles more. These activities are not
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only
useful for
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air
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but
also
they
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help
them to
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keep
fit and save their
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health


Conclusion

To sum up I
personally
tend to
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agree
these concerns. I
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think
all types of
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solution
are crucial to conserve
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air
for the generation of
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future
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IELTS essay DISCUSS BOTH THE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
324 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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