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Application regarding visa

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My name is Sifar, and I was born on December 26, 2002, in Gaya, Bihar. In July 2020, I graduated from Central Hindu Boys School-Varanasi with a High School Diploma. I am composing this letter regarding the request for an Italian Student Visa (D-type) because I was recently admitted into Sapienza University of Rome's Bachelors of Sustainable Building Engineering programme for the class of 2024, which spans six semesters from the academic year 2021 to 2024.
My name is
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Sifar
, and I
was born
on December 26, 2002, in
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Gaya
, Bihar. In July 2020, I graduated from Central Hindu Boys School-Varanasi with a High School Diploma.

I am composing this letter regarding the request for an Italian Student Visa (D-type)
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I was recently admitted into
Possible spelling mistake found.
Sapienza
University of Rome's Bachelors of Sustainable Building Engineering
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programme
for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
of 2024, which spans six semesters from the academic year 2021 to 2024.
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IELTS essay Application regarding visa

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
76 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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