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Discuss advantages and disadvantages of following same diet daily or on a regular intervals.

Discuss advantages and disadvantages of following same diet daily or on a regular intervals. j50Jy
Nowadays, many people prefer to follow strict diet in order to maintain their physique. There are various benefits and demerits in doing so. This essay will discuss merits and demerits of following the same diet or on a regular basis. Firstly, looking at the brighter side, following the same healthy diet everyday or on regular basis can definitely improve our health. This develops the habit of eating healthy which in turn helps in fighting various diseases. For example, a person who is eating healthy everyday has very less chances of being sick. As diet food generally contains fruits and vegetables it provides necessary vitamins. Secondly, eating diet helps in reducing weight. Consistently following this can develop the skill of self control inside a person. A person, for instance, is wanting to reduce weight can follow the diet prescribed by nutritionist and if he sticks to it then this would not only help him to reduce weight, but also help him to control himself and prevent eating junk food. However, it can have very great impact on body too. Consuming same food everyday means having the same vitamins and this could develop the deficiency of other vitamins. This could further lead to need for medication. Furthermore, eating same food everyday would easily bore people. As an example, consuming fruits and vegetables daily could be interesting for few days only but after sometime it would bore the person. Sometimes this could also be a reason for craving for a certain food and consuming it in excess amount would lead to many future problems. In conclusion, it is necessary to follow diet but it should not be necessarily followed everyday. It is advisable to take the diet according to description by doctors and our body type.
Nowadays,
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many
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people
prefer to follow strict diet in order to maintain their physique. There are various benefits and demerits in doing
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so
. This essay will discuss merits and demerits of following the same diet or on a regular basis.

Firstly
, looking at the brighter side, following the same healthy diet
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everyday
or on regular basis can definitely
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improve
our health. This develops the habit of
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eating
healthy which in turn
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helps
in fighting various diseases.
For example
, a
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person
who is
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eating
healthy
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everyday
has
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very
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less
chances of being sick. As diet
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food
generally
contains fruits and vegetables it provides necessary vitamins.

Secondly
,
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eating
diet
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helps
in reducing weight.
Consistently
following this can develop the
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skill
of
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self control
inside a
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person
. A
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person
,
for instance
,
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is wanting
to
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reduce
weight can follow the diet prescribed by nutritionist and if he sticks to it then this would not
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only
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help
him to
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reduce
weight,
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also
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help
him to control himself and
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prevent
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eating
junk food.

However
, it can have
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very
great impact on body too. Consuming same
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food
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everyday
means having the same vitamins and this could develop the deficiency of other vitamins. This could
further
lead to need for medication.
Furthermore
,
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eating
same
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food
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everyday
would
easily
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bore
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people
. As an example, consuming fruits and vegetables daily could be interesting for few days
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only
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but
after sometime it would
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bore
the
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person
.
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Sometimes
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also
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food
and consuming it in excess amount would lead to
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future problems.

In conclusion
, it is necessary to follow diet
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but
it should not be
necessarily
followed
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
. It is advisable to take the diet according to description by doctors and our body type.
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IELTS essay Discuss advantages and disadvantages of following same diet daily or on a regular intervals.

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