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Beauty standard makes some people feel bad about themself and affect their way of living. Do you agree or disagree?

Beauty standard makes some people feel bad about themself and affect their way of living. M3PDa

Nowadays, beauty standard attack some populations to feel low sense of self-confidence and influence in their living. This essay agree that beauty standard in society that affect to women that do not in beauty standard. To begin with, a lot of women that different from standard suffer from beauty standard in society. Some women concern with their shapes and sizes of body, skin color and height which, affect to their self-confidence, self-esteem and self-love. Moreover, reduced self-confidence, reduced self-esteem and reduced self-love cause emotions such as valueless, miserable, anxious and lonely. Hence negative ideas can often lead to psychological issue such as mental and physical health, depression, eating disorder and reduced self-love. In fact, nothing in the world is more important than your mental and physical health.

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