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disadvantages of being a part of large family

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It is true that in the past, families tended to be larger than they nowadays because people had more children. From my standpoint, there were both benefits and drawbacks about this issue. In the first place, I reckon there were more disadvantages of being a part of a large family. To begin with, household finances were the most enormous problem they had to face up with. In case that some families were rich, that was not a big deal, but with a poor family, it was a really serious problem. Because there were many members live in the house, the amount of money that the parents had to pay for living increased significantly. Next, having many children led to the fact that the homemaker could be really busy because she had to do all the housework as well as looked after the kids. In addition, the house also did not have enough rooms for all the children, so they had to share rooms together. For this reason, it meant that the kids didn’t have their own space for personal interest. An inevitable thing that would turn up regularly between each member was the arguments. Therefore, the family would have a negative atmosphere. Finally, the last disadvantage of being a part of a large family was the children were not loved equally. Some kids received most of their parents affection, but some did not. Howerver, there were still some benefits when living in a big family.
It is true that in the past,
families
tended to be larger than they nowadays
because
people
had more
children
. From my standpoint, there were both benefits and drawbacks about this issue.

In the
first
place, I reckon there were more disadvantages of being a part of a large
family
. To
begin
with, household finances were the most enormous problem they had to face up with. In case that
some
families
were rich, that was not a
big
deal,
but
with a poor
family
, it was a
really
serious problem.
Because
there were
many
members
live
in the
house
, the amount of money that the parents had to pay for living increased
significantly
.
Next
, having
many
children
led to the fact that the homemaker could be
really
busy
because
she had to do all the housework
as well
as looked after the kids.
In addition
, the
house
also
did not have
enough
rooms for all the
children
,
so
they had to share rooms together.
For this reason
, it meant that the kids didn’t have their
own
space for personal interest. An inevitable thing that would turn up
regularly
between each member was the arguments.
Therefore
, the
family
would have a
negative
atmosphere.
Finally
, the last disadvantage of being a part of a large
family
was the
children
were not
loved
equally
.
Some
kids received most of their parents affection,
but
some
did not.

Howerver
, there were
still
some
benefits when living in a
big
family
.
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IELTS essay disadvantages of being a part of large family

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