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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short easy on how to besthandle the relationship between doctors and patients. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short easy on how to besthandle the relationship between doctors and patients. but no more than 180 words. 7WJMY
Recent years, the relationship between doctors and patients is not as good as usual. Quarrelling and even fighting between doctors and patients are heard from time to time. Some patients felt that they were not always treated very well and the fee they paid for their sickness was too high, on the contrary, doctors thought that their workload was very heavy but patients did not respect them. To solve this problem, as far as I am concerned, more comunication between doctors and patients should be made so that they can understand each other better. Moreover, we should construct an efficient medical system to guarantee that all patients have enough money for their treatment and doctors can do their best in working not caring about their income and social status. I believe that with the endeavor of all of us the relationship between doctors and patients will become better and better and our society will become more and more harmonious.
Recent years, the relationship between
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doctors
and
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patients
is not as
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good
as usual. Quarrelling and even fighting between
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doctors
and
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patients
are heard
from time to time.
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Some
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patients
felt that they were not always treated
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very
well and the fee they paid for their sickness was too high,
on the contrary
,
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doctors
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thought
that their workload was
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very
heavy
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but
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patients
did not respect them.

To solve this problem, as far as I
am concerned
, more
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comunication
between
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doctors
and
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patients
should
be made
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so
that they can understand each other better.
Moreover
, we should construct an efficient medical system to guarantee that all
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patients
have
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enough
money for their treatment and
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doctors
can do their best in working not caring about their income and social status.

I believe that with the endeavor of all of us the relationship between
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
doctors
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
patients
will become better and better and our society will become more and more harmonious.

IELTS essay Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short easy on how to besthandle the relationship between doctors and patients. but no more than 180 words.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
159 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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