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What do you think about dress code have to be compulsory at work/ college

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Dress Code Wearing uniform at work/school gives you different personality. Dress code can make you noticable. Sometimes, you feel bored wearing uniform. But everyone can't afford to put on everyday new and fashionable clothes. For example if you work at a restaurant your uniform become compulsory because it's easy to find out for customers that you are working here. Do you like wearing uniform? If ask me I would say big yes! I have lots of reasons for that like firstly, I am not able to buy new clothes from my salary. Secondly, I like to be equal at work and nobody have rights to judge someone on their clothes. Thirdly, it's easy to understand someone that you are working here In the end, I would like to say dress code has to become compulsory at work and college. You should have to show you are abilities at work and college, don't need to be a showcase there.
Dress Code Wearing
uniform
at work/school gives you
different
personality. Dress code can
make
you
noticable
.
Sometimes
, you feel bored wearing
uniform
.
But
everyone can't afford to put on everyday new and fashionable clothes.
For example
if you
work
at a restaurant your
uniform
become compulsory
because
it's easy to find out for customers that you are working here. Do you like wearing
uniform
? If ask me I would say
big
yes! I have lots of reasons for that like
firstly
, I am not able to
buy
new clothes from my salary.
Secondly
, I like to be equal at
work
and nobody
have
rights to judge someone on their clothes.
Thirdly
, it's easy to understand someone that you are working here

In the
end
, I would like to say dress code
has to
become compulsory at
work
and college. You should
have to
show
you are abilities at
work
and college, don't need to be a showcase there.
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IELTS essay What do you think about dress code have to be compulsory at work/ college

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158 words
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