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does living in a house bring more advantages than living in an apartment

does living in a house bring more advantages than living in an apartment GrNnx
Everyone have they own dreams to have a comfortable and beautiful place to live with their family. When talk about place the first thing come to our mind is house because everyone want to have their own house. In this era, they are a lot of type of place to live, for examples is apartment. So people nowadays can choose either one that they like. Apartment and house have their own advantages and disadvantages, when we want to compare house and apartment we must look at many aspects because this is about a place that we want to live for a long time or maybe for the entire of our lifetime.
Everyone
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they
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dreams to have a comfortable and
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beautiful
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place
to
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live
with their family. When talk about
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place
the
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to our mind is
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house
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because
everyone
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want
to have their
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own
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. In this era, they are
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a lot of
type of
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place
to
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live
, for examples is apartment.
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people
nowadays can choose either one that they like. Apartment and
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house
have their
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own
advantages and disadvantages, when we want to compare
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house
and apartment we
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must
look at
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many
aspects
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this is about a
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place
that we want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
for a long time or maybe for the entire of our lifetime.
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IELTS essay does living in a house bring more advantages than living in an apartment

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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