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Digital technology (communication,social meadia)

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Due to advancement in technology, social media, and digital communication is paramount aspect of the society. They are very broad media. They have completely changed and revolutionized the world. They influence many aspects of life starting from education, communication, business and even entertainment. For this reason, it has been introduced in colleges as main courses so as to achieve and fully utilize this noble means. Students are trained on how to incorporate social media and digital communication in firms. It has made communication and interactions easier, It is easier to retain and create new friends through social media. It is also easy to reach a large group of people. The fan base for major social media sites has been growing steadily for the past three years. This has led to social media sites being the most used tools of marketing. Many companies are linked to social media sites. This way, they can create and link ads to social media. This enables them to reach many people quickly. Also through creation and sharing of videos, it is easy to communicate and market products or ideas. Many companies today have a section that deals with social media and digital communication to ensure that the company is connected with the outside world. Social media has many benefits. However, it also has widespread effects on the society. One of the main problems of social media is that it is very free, and this is a risk to children that are under age. They have access to a lot of information. Some of this information is harmful to them and may negatively influence their behavior. Social media has also led to breakage of many families. There is a lot of misunderstanding. It is a means that need to be controlled. In fact, the majority of people have become too dependent on technology for each and everything. There is not even a single place where technology is not used.
Due to advancement in technology,
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social
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media
, and digital
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communication
is paramount aspect of the society. They are
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very
broad
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media
. They have completely
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changed
and revolutionized the world.
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They
influence
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many
aspects of life starting from education,
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communication
, business and even entertainment.
For this reason
, it has
been introduced
in colleges as main courses
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so as to
achieve and
fully
utilize this noble means. Students
are trained
on how to incorporate
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social
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media
and digital
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communication
in firms.

It has made
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communication
and interactions easier, It is easier to retain and create new friends through
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social
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media
. It is
also
easy to reach a large group of
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people
. The fan base for major
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social
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media
sites has been growing
steadily
for the past three years. This has led to
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social
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media
sites being the most
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used
tools of marketing.
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Many
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companies
are linked
to
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social
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media
sites. This way, they can create and link ads to
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social
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media
. This enables them to reach
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many
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people
quickly
.
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Also
through creation and sharing of videos, it is easy to communicate and market products or
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ideas
.
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Many
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companies
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today
have a section that deals with
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social
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media
and digital
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communication
to ensure that the
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company
is connected
with the outside world.

Social
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media
has
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many
benefits.
However
, it
also
has widespread effects on the society. One of the main problems of
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social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
is that it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
free, and this is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
to children that are under age. They have access to
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a lot of
information.
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Some
of this information is harmful to them and may
negatively
influence their behavior.
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Social
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media
has
also
led to breakage of
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many
families. There is
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a lot of
misunderstanding. It is a means that need to
be controlled
.

In fact, the majority of
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people
have become too dependent on technology for each and everything. There is not even a single place where technology is not
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used
.
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IELTS essay Digital technology (communication, social meadia)

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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