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Different aspect on uniform in primary and secondary schools

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There are different views on students type of clothing while they to school. All of them should have standard dressing code and that is school uniform. I therefore agree that learning will be point of focus if school uniform is used rather than individual fashione at school. To begin with, as a standard dressing code, uniform has more advantages than drawbacks. Fistly, nearly all schools using uniforms across the world shows equality to learners, this makes the ones from humble background to be protected from discrimination leading to high self esteem hence better performance. The standardization also provides identification of school going children while in different travelling back home after schoool. On the other hand, fashionable cloths works best for student's who come from financial stable families. However, it brings with it alot of cahllenges. For instance, it will not be easy to control the type of dressing code. One student may wear decently while another may have sexualy provoking dress which divert students attention from learning. In conclusion, students dressing code is an important aspect towards creating conducive learning environment. Therefore, uniform is very key aspect of school or education institutionals success. In my opinion, wearing uniform should be implemented in all basic educational centers.
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views on
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students
type of clothing while they to
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school
. All of them should have standard
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dressing
code and
that is
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school
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uniform
. I
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agree
that learning will be point of focus if
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school
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uniform
is
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used
rather
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fashione at
school.

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begin
with, as a standard
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dressing
code,
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uniform
has more advantages than drawbacks.
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Fistly
,
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all
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schools
using
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uniforms
across the world
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shows
equality to learners, this
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makes
the ones from humble background to
be protected
from discrimination leading to high
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self esteem
hence
better performance. The standardization
also
provides identification of
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school
going children while in
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different
travelling back home after
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schoool
.

On the other hand
, fashionable cloths works best for student's who
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come
from financial stable families.
However
, it brings with it
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alot
of
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cahllenges
.
For instance
, it will not be easy to control the type of
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dressing
code. One
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student
may wear
decently
while another may have
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sexualy
provoking dress which divert
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students
attention from learning.

In conclusion
,
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students
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dressing
code is an
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important
aspect towards creating conducive learning environment.
Therefore
,
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uniform
is
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very
key aspect of
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school
or education
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institutionals
success. In my opinion, wearing
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uniform
should
be implemented
in all basic educational centers.
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IELTS essay Different aspect on uniform in primary and secondary schools

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