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to visit İstanbul as a tourist

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There are three important reasons to visit İstanbul as a tourist. First reason is İstanbul has very deep cultural things. For instance, there are mosques, churchs, synagogues here, and this place was built many years ago. İstanbul is an important city for all big religions. Second reasons is that a part of İstanbul is in the continent of Asia and other part is in the continent of Europa. This city that has different continents offers to us different cultures. In my opinion, people should visit here as tourist even people who live or born in İstanbul. People should see bridges that bridge connecting continents, because in the evening, there is a wonderful view in there. Final reason is that you can find anything that you want. There are many different restaurants, museums, temples, natural beauties and entertainment opportunities in İstanbul. To sum up, İstanbul culture has beautiful and fantastic things.
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IELTS essay to visit İstanbul as a tourist

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150 words
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