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Difference between normal friends and best friend

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Nowadays everyone has friends and one of them best friend is forever close to heart. In my life there are myriad friends but here I would like to talk about my best friend. She is non other my classmates is named nishu and she is intelligent as well as pretty girl. In addition to this, she seems to siny but strong and she always face problem with boldly. moverver, she always stand with me in every situation along with she is strong girl. Apart from this, she is time punctual as well as she also respect elder and younger, her favourite animal is dog and dog is being protected by her. she also take care. she also take merit in very class and I feel proud of her. In the other hand, there are many friends in my life, but no one can take of her. Primary, they also Play role. When we get together then we spent time together and do party.
Nowadays everyone has
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and one of them best
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is forever close to heart. In my life there are myriad
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friends
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here I would like to talk about my best
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. She is
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non other
my classmates
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nishu and
she is intelligent
as well
as pretty girl.
In addition
to this, she seems to
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siny
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strong and
she always
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face
problem with
boldly
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moverver
, she always
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stand
with me in every situation along with she
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is strong
girl. Apart from this, she is time punctual
as well
as she
also
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respect
elder and younger, her
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favourite
animal is dog and dog is
being protected
by her.
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she
also
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take
care.
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she
also
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take
merit in
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very
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class
and I feel proud of her. In the other hand, there are
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many
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in my life,
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no one can take of her. Primary, they
also
Play role. When we
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get
together then we spent time together and do party.
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IELTS essay Difference between normal friends and best friend

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