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devolop computer programing at school

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Nowadays, information technology is developing more and more, many young people love programming and want to become programmers. Therefore, my school has contacted famous centers in this field with the aim of helping students satisfy their passion for computer programming, have background knowledge about programming and define a career. career for yourself. I was very fortunate to experience the programming industry that I loved so much right when I was a high school student. And this is a rare thing that few schools can create such good conditions for students
Nowadays, information technology is developing more and more,
many
young
people
love
programming
and want to become programmers.
Therefore
, my school has contacted
famous
centers in this field with the aim of helping students satisfy their passion for computer
programming
, have background knowledge about
programming
and define a career.
career
for yourself. I was
very
fortunate to experience the
programming
industry that I
loved
so
much right when I was a high school student. And this is a rare thing that few schools can create such
good
conditions for
students
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IELTS essay devolop computer programing at school

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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