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Due to a shortage of land, vertical buildings appear the norm in futuristic architecture. Do you agree or disagree?

High-rise prosperity in recent years has made a trend of erect-oriented buildings separate all over the world and impact deeply on futuristic design. In my perspective, I totally concur with this statement for some compelling reasons below. On the one hand, vertical buildings' appearance can hand in with people to cope with many social issues which are existing in our daily life. Firstly, being built with exact acreage of ground, buildings use their height to design and make spaces for many purposes such as for offices, apartments, and to name but a few instead of directly constructing on land. Hence, a great amount of property can be saved to reasonably use for community constructions such as schools, hospitals, parks, and sewer. Secondly, vertical buildings are an ideal way for engineers to design as well as illustrating their inspirations and creative minds. Finally, as a result, a whole city or even a country can have organized arrangements or buildings and ground spaces, which will be stable for a long time. According to this, human life and the environment are clearly taken advantage of this kind of architecture. When apartment blocks are built, more habitats appear in form of flats and penthouses for citizens to live in. Then, people can live in more and more comfortable and convenient spaces, which can help them to improve their household standard. For the environment, green trees can have larger spaces to be planted and grow up as the consequence of reasonable property's use. Furthermore, some projects of eco-living now are in process that combines trees with flats to develop the air's quality as well as the surroundings. For example, in Vietnam, one project of apartment blocks called Solforest is being built which each flat of the building has large enough space for planting trees with the ambition of covering the city with a green and eco-environment. In conclusion, plenty of architecture are appeared to serve human life, but vertical designs are stable architecture which not only can help people's living areas but also arrange the infrastructure worldwide.
High-rise prosperity in recent years has made a trend of erect-oriented
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buildings
separate all over the world and impact
deeply
on futuristic
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design
. In my perspective, I
totally
concur with this statement for
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some
compelling reasons below.

On the one hand, vertical buildings' appearance can hand in with
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people
to cope with
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many
social issues which are existing in our daily life.
Firstly
,
being built
with exact acreage of ground,
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buildings
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
their height to
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design
and
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make
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spaces
for
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many
purposes such as for offices, apartments, and to name
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but
a few
instead
of
directly
constructing on land.
Hence
, a great amount of property can
be saved
to
reasonably
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
for community constructions such as schools, hospitals, parks, and sewer.
Secondly
, vertical
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buildings
are an ideal way for engineers to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
design
as well
as illustrating their inspirations and creative minds.
Finally
,
as a result
, a whole city or even a country can have organized arrangements or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buildings
and ground
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spaces
, which will be stable for a long time.

According to this, human life and the environment are
clearly
taken advantage of this kind of architecture. When apartment blocks
are built
, more habitats appear in form of flats and penthouses for citizens to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in. Then,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in more and more comfortable and convenient
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spaces
, which can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them to
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improve
their household standard. For the environment, green trees can have larger
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spaces
to
be planted
and grow up as the consequence of reasonable property's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
.
Furthermore
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
projects of eco-living
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
are in process that combines trees with flats to develop the air's quality
as well
as the surroundings.
For example
, in Vietnam, one project of apartment blocks called Solforest is
being built
which each flat of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
has large
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
space
for planting trees with the ambition of covering the city with a green and eco-environment.

In conclusion
,
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plenty
of architecture
are appeared
to serve human life,
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but
vertical
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designs
are stable architecture which not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's living areas
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but
also
arrange the infrastructure worldwide.
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IELTS essay Due to a shortage of land, vertical buildings appear the norm in futuristic architecture.

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342 words
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