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Despite sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays

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today
's contemporary world, life has never been as comfortable and convenient compared to the past periods. Notwithstanding a number of sport centers and facilities have
been built
to encourage individuals to
get
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live
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, the result
is proven
to be
otherwise
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IELTS essay Despite sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
52 words
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5.0
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