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description of your ideal partner

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If someone asks me what is your ideal partner, I will answer a sense of humor and intelligent. Yes, there are two characteristics I need from my partner and this is my ideal partner. Why do you need these characteristics? I do not want to work with a difficult partner and with an atmosphere always stress, especially when I work team, this verry terrible. A sense of humor partner will help work team complete work more effectively and reduce stress atmosphere during team working. Imagine you have three hours to complete deadline and partner can not think about ideas or the partner very slow to give ideas what do you want to work with this partner? To me, I do not want to work with them. I want to work with an intelligent partner because i can give another Ideas and develop them and complete work easier and faster.
If someone asks me what is your ideal
partner
, I will answer a sense of humor and intelligent. Yes, there are two characteristics I need from my
partner
and this is my ideal
partner
. Why do you need these characteristics?

I do not
want
to
work
with a difficult
partner
and with an atmosphere always
stress
,
especially
when I
work
team, this
verry
terrible. A sense of humor
partner
will
help
work
team complete
work
more
effectively
and
reduce
stress
atmosphere during team working. Imagine you have three hours to complete deadline and
partner
can not
think
about
ideas
or the
partner
very
slow to give
ideas
what do you
want
to
work
with this
partner
? To me, I do not
want
to
work
with them. I
want
to
work
with an intelligent
partner
because
i
can give another
Ideas
and develop them and complete
work
easier and faster.
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IELTS essay description of your ideal partner

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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