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Description of wave energy machine

A wave energy machine exploits the wave power. This machine is placed in the water to know the wave power. This machine consists of electricity generator, turbine, and two chambers. Electricity generator generates the energy to turbine. The air flows in the both directions through upwards and from downwards. The air flow enters into the turbine and move toward upwards. The wave direction enters into the wave machine through the gap which is located at the botton of the machine. There are two location options for wave energy machines. And the installation costs for the machines varies from place to place. If the machine is installed at large waves, it gives high output and the installation cost is high. If it is installed at small waves, it gives low output and the installation cost is low.
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energy
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machine
exploits the
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wave
power. This
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machine
is placed
in the water to know the
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wave
power. This
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machine
consists of electricity generator, turbine, and two chambers. Electricity generator generates the energy to turbine. The air flows in the both directions through upwards and from downwards. The air flow enters into the turbine and
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move
toward upwards. The
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wave
direction enters into the
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wave
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machine
through the gap which
is located
at the
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botton
of the machine.

There are two location options for
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wave
energy
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machines
. And the installation costs for the
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machines
varies from place to place. If the
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machine
is installed
at large
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waves
, it gives high output and the installation cost is high. If it
is installed
at
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small
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waves
, it gives low output and the installation cost is low.

IELTS essay Description of wave energy machine

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
136 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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