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description about how to make an omelet

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First you take some eggs and crack them in a bowl. Whisk them up, so they're quite high and fluffy. In a hot pan, and you need a pan that's that's kind of small that the sides go up at an angle. You put some oil and heat it up, so it's quite hot. Then you take your whipped up eggs or whisked up eggs and pour them into the pan. As it's cooking, if you take a spatula and push the bottom layer of the egg to the sides and then to the middle so the uncooked egg gets to the bottom of the pan
First
you take
some
eggs and crack them in a bowl. Whisk them up,
so
they're quite high and fluffy. In a hot
pan
, and you need a
pan
that's that's kind of
small
that the sides go up at an angle. You put
some
oil and heat it up,
so
it's quite hot. Then you take your whipped up eggs or whisked up eggs and pour them into the
pan
. As it's cooking, if you take a spatula and push the bottom layer of the egg to the sides and then to the middle
so
the uncooked egg
gets
to the bottom of the
pan
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IELTS essay description about how to make an omelet

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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