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First thing I noticed was she has round face and short hair that makes she is extremely cute, with short height that make she is more lovely than. At the first time I look at her I cannot guess her age. She has a slender figure and a double chin that looks consequently dinky. When she goes everywhere she is always neat and smart looking. I love her immensely much! She is extroverted, sociable, active and friendly. She always wanted to go out. She loves to travelling everywhere. When she plays with others, she is funny person and kind person too. Everyone very love to play with her. That make she very happy.

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At the first
 time I look at her I cannot guess her age. She has a slender figure and a double chin that looks consequently
 dinky. When she goes everywhere she is always neat and smart looking. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
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She is extroverted
, sociable, active and friendly. She always wanted to go out. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 to travelling everywhere. When she plays with others, she is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:amusinghumorous
funny
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love
 to play with her. That This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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very
 happy. 