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describle beautiful place to visit

describle beautiful place to visit 8QPdr
i feel like i've read somewhere that nha trang is also widely considered one of most beautiful and stunning beach in the world. you can go here by car, motorbike; otherwise, if you can save time you will buy ticket of plane. it take you 2 hour to fly that. beside nha trang have bunch of different outdoor activities. in term of water sport, you can join in from sunbathing, parasailing try out scuba diving, . . . furthermore you can taste local cuisines, fresh seafood. therefore, you and family get away from it all after busy working.
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i
feel like
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i've
read somewhere that
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nha
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trang
is
also
widely
considered one of most
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beautiful
and stunning beach in the world.
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you
can go here by car, motorbike;
otherwise
, if you can save time you will
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buy
ticket of
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plane
.
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it
Did you mean "takes"?
take
you 2
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hour
to
fly
that.
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beside
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nha
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trang
have
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bunch of
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different
outdoor activities.
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in
term of water sport, you can
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join
in from sunbathing, parasailing try out scuba diving
Did you just mean "," or "."?
, .
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.
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.
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furthermore
you can taste local cuisines, fresh seafood.
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therefore
, you and family
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get
away from it all after busy working.

IELTS essay describle beautiful place to visit

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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