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describing where you live

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I live in Tehran, which is the capital of Iran. It's a big and crowded city. In spring and autumn, it has nice weather but in summer it is so hot. It has a famous mall and cinema also it has a nice mountain. Tehran has many green and beautiful parks, that people can spend their time there and take a relax. My hometown is Rasht. It's located in the north of Iran. it is a green city with muggy weather. I believe that all of the season is nice in Rasht except os summer. It's not as hot as Theran, but it's wet because of humid. Rasht has a traditional famous Bazar, that everything can be founded there. In the center of the city, we have some famous buildings that belong to Hitler's century. Rasht is near to mountains, sea, and forest. They are the best attractive subject that I love about Rasht. it is possible to go to one of them in less than 2 hours. Evevnthogh in someplace like Ramsar sea and the mountain is located inside of each other.
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in Tehran, which is the capital of Iran.
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in summer it is
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mall and cinema
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green and
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parks, that
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can spend their time there and take
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located in the north of Iran.
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is a green city with muggy weather. I believe that
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buildings that belong to Hitler's century.

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IELTS essay describing where you live

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
183 words
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