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Artificial intelligence robots

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Today Todays, technology has developed dramatically and numerous technical devices have been applied in normal life. One of the most important inventions that people have ever published is artificially intelligent intelligence robots. Many believe that they will do all jobs eventually, in my opinion, I just agree to a certain extentThere are various advantages that artificially intelligent intelligence robots bring to our out life. Firstly, it takes less time to finish a job while the quality is guaranteed. For instance, some jobs which are repetitive such as producing produce shoes, the robots will do it with perfection and they are not likely to be bored or exhausted. In addition, in spite inspite of their’ high cost, they can help cut off human resources resource in companies, which that will lead to the decrease in the amount of money that business owners pay for workers every monthmonths. It is such a good deal for them. On the other hand, there are still some jobs that robots can not do perfectly at all. Some jobs that need human touch, flexible thinking and objective decisions can not be done by robots. For example, the jobs which are related to education, medical system have numerous complicated problems problem that algorithms algorithmic can not solve, so people have to do them by themselves. Besides, it will be a threat to humans human someday if they depend dramatically on robots. Robots have artificial intelligence and they learn from humans human everyday. In, in the future, they may control the world and people will be in danger. In conclusion, there are benefits and drawbacks in this argument. The replacement of robots in many jobs is imminent, in my viewpoint, we should apply them in suitable jobs and the jobs that need human touch still should be done by humans,
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while the quality
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someday if they depend
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on robots. Robots have artificial
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intelligence and
they learn from
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IELTS essay Artificial intelligence robots

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
302 words
5.5
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