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Describing of a solution to a problem

Describing of a solution to a problem q1EPP

Do you want to know where the natural gas of Kazakhstan is? The residents of my town - Turkestan - would too, because unavailable gas evolved into a big problem for them. For 3. 5 years, the town citizens have tried their best to get natural gas. Last winter was extremely pleasant: all the urban areas were already supplied with gas. Previously, living without gas became harder in the winters. Why in the winter? Coal ( people used instead of gas ) was in the atmosphere: blackish snow on the ground, a constant gray fog in the sky. Trying to breathe with clean air, we smelled unpleasant carbon, and even on our clothes. Our city transformed into a one with low ecology and life quality - people’s average longevity was reducing. In front of our eyes, the issue became visible to the administration, and they started providing gas inside the city. Thin yellow tubes and meters were run the length of the entire city. Turkestan looked like a city with holes in the ground for 3 years, but it was the best way to wire the gas. After the government’s actions, we have started seeing Turkestan in the rank of ecologically safe areas. Finally, Turkestan could return natural gas, so we live like 21st-century citizens: with clean air and modern gas-supplied houses. We consider the villages Karasyk and Chaga near us should also provide gas as fast as possible. After all, gas unavailability should not be a problem anywhere.

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 of Kazakhstan is? The residents of my town Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 Turkestan Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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because
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big
 problem for them. For 3. 5 years, the town citizens have tried their best to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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. Last winter was extremely
 pleasant: all the urban areas were already supplied with gas.

Previously, living without You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 became harder in the winters. Why in the winter? Coal Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis(
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people
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gas
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 was in the atmosphere: blackish snow on the ground, a constant gray fog in the sky. Trying to breathe with clean air, we smelled unpleasant carbon, and even on our clothes. Our city transformed into a one with low ecology and life quality Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
’s average longevity was reducing.

In front of our eyes, the issue became visible to the administration, and they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 providing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 inside the city. Thin yellow tubes and meters were run
 the length of the entire city. Turkestan looked like a city with holes in the ground for 3 years, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it was the best way to wire the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
. After the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
’s actions, we have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 seeing Turkestan in the rank of ecologically
 safe areas.

Finally
, Turkestan could return natural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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live
 like 21st-century citizens: with clean air and modern gas-supplied This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
. We consider the villages Possible spelling mistake found.KarateBarackKarachiHarassKaraokeKara
Karasyk
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Chaga
 near us should also
 provide You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
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fast
 as possible. After all
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
gas
 unavailability should not be a problem anywhere. 