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describing actions to be taken to protect the environment.

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The environment has emerged as a major concern in modern society. We are constantly confronted with the issues of environmental problems which have become increasingly serious in recent years. Some people believe that individuals have little power to affect environmental change, while others believe that only the government has the authority to do so. However, from my perspective. I suggest that it will be more beneficial if both the government and the citizens share responsibility. For starters, some people may think that addressing environmental issues is a difficult task for individuals. In fact, we can practice a variety of good habits that will help to improve the environment. For instance, they can ride a bike instead of travelling in carbon dioxide-emitting vehicles. It can be clearly seen that individuals can actually contribute to helping reduce environmental issues as fewer use private vehicles mean that lower emissions of transportation, as well as less air pollution. In contrast, it is true that some environmental problems are too big for individuals to deal with. There are serious environmental problems such as global warming, the greenhouse effect, and other extreme weather events. It is certainly true that environmental problems cannot be solved without the help of the government. Authorities can impose a lot of strict policies on environmental protection, for instance, recycling, pressuring all the factories not to produce too much waste exceed the allowable level. As a result, less waste into the river, water quality improves, and water sources for human consumption are ensured. In conclusion, everyone is responsible to protect the environment. The issues can be solved effectively with the cooperation of individuals and the government. Save environment it’s meant to save ourselves.
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environment
has emerged as a major concern in modern society. We are
constantly
confronted with the
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issues
of
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environmental
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problems
which have become
increasingly
serious in recent years.
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Some
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people
believe that
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individuals
have
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little
power to affect
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environmental
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change
, while others believe that
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only
the
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government
has the authority to do
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so
.
However
, from my perspective. I suggest that it will be more beneficial if both the
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government
and the citizens share responsibility.

For starters,
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some
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people
may
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think
that addressing
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environmental
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issues
is a difficult task for
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individuals
. In fact, we can practice a variety of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
habits that will
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help
to
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improve
the
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environment
.
For instance
, they can ride a bike
instead
of travelling in carbon dioxide-emitting vehicles. It can be
clearly
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seen
that
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individuals
can actually contribute to helping
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reduce
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environmental
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issues
as fewer
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use
private vehicles mean that lower emissions of transportation,
as well
as less air pollution.

In contrast
, it is true that
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some
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environmental
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problems
are too
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big
for
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individuals
to deal with. There are serious
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environmental
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problems
such as global warming, the greenhouse effect, and other extreme weather
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events
. It is
certainly
true that
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environmental
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problems
cannot
be solved
without the
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help
of the
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government
. Authorities can impose
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a lot of
strict policies on
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environmental
protection,
for instance
, recycling, pressuring all the factories not to produce too much waste exceed the allowable level.
As a result
, less waste into the river, water quality
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improves
, and water sources for human consumption
are ensured
.

In conclusion
, everyone is responsible to protect the
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environment
. The
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issues
can
be solved
effectively
with the cooperation of
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individuals
and the
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government
. Save
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environment
it’s meant to save ourselves.
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IELTS essay describing actions to be taken to protect the environment.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
281 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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