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DESCRIBING A PROCESS OR A PROCEDURE

DESCRIBING A PROCESS OR A PROCEDURE OVBoE

Nowadays, science and technology are expand constantly. Telephone is one of the essential devices that can helpful for our life. The one in a picture is a standard push-button telephone. On the top of the phone is the receiver, it has a mouthpiece and earpiece. On the push-button keyboard there are twelve buttons which has different symbols. When we want to make a telephone call, we should use this instructions. First of all, pick up the receiver from the cradle and put it next to our ears. After that, we push the buttons for the number we need and then we will hear the beep-ing sound, two beeps followed by a pause. Now, we just wait for the other end to answer you. If the line is busy, we will hear a steady beeping sound. For the time being, put back the receiver and wait. Each of us should use it reasonably and efficiently.

Nowadays, science and technology are Consider using a past participle here: "expanded".expanded
expand
constantly
. Telephone is one of the essential devices that can helpful for our life.

The one in a picture is a standard push-button telephone. On the top of the phone is the receiver, it has a mouthpiece and earpiece. On the push-button keyboard there are twelve buttons which has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 symbols.

When we want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a telephone call, we should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
Did you mean "these"?these
this
 instructions. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, pick up the receiver from the cradle and put it next
 to our ears. After that, we push the buttons for the number we Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).need, and
need and
 then we will hear the Possible spelling mistake found.beeping
beep-ing
 sound, two beeps followed by a pause. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 wait for the other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 to answer you. If the line is busy, we will hear a steady beeping sound. For the time being, put back the receiver and wait. Each of us should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it reasonably
 and efficiently
. 