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It is considered by a group of people that spending money contributes to the economy while others think it is better to save money for the long run. In my opinion, I believe that each country should balance its economy for a better future. Governments and companies should consider solving future problems. Also, they say over-consuming is risky for whole sectors. so they suggest stepping back for some time to sustain economic stability. Nowadays, most countries' economy is linked, so, whenever a country's economy is fluctuating, there is always another that gets badly affected. For that reason, countries and companies have to plan for negative situations. For instance, in construction sectors, many products such as aluminum panels, glasses, steel materials, wooden materials, etc. are being used. Thanks to construction companies, many small-medium enterprises and subcontractors can stay in the market. Furthremore, governments and companies should consider solving future problems. Also, they say over-consuming is risky for whole sectors. so they suggest stepping back for some time to sustain economic stability. Nowadays, most countries' economy is linked, so, whenever a country's economy is fluctuating, there is always another that gets badly affected. For that reason, countries and companies have to plan for negative situations. Finally, in my opinion, neither stepping back nor overconsuming is to resolve the economic problems. To sustain the economy, all sectors(private-state) have to work on their businesses reasonably and continuously.
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is considered
by a group of
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people
that spending money contributes to the
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economy
while others
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think
it is better to save money for the long run.

In my opinion, I believe that each country should balance its
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economy
for a better future.
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Governments
and
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companies
should consider solving future problems.
Also
, they say over-consuming is risky for whole sectors.
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so
they suggest stepping back for
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some
time to sustain economic stability. Nowadays, most countries'
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economy
is linked
,
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so
, whenever a country's
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economy
is fluctuating, there is always another that
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gets
badly
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affected
. For that reason, countries and
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companies
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have to
plan for
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negative
situations.

For instance
, in construction sectors,
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many
products such as aluminum panels, glasses, steel materials, wooden materials, etc. are being
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used
.

Thanks to construction
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companies
,
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many
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small
-medium enterprises and subcontractors can stay in the market.

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Furthremore
,
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governments
and
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companies
should consider solving future problems.
Also
, they say over-consuming is risky for whole sectors.
Use a comma before 'so' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
so
they suggest stepping back for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time to sustain economic stability. Nowadays, most countries'
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
is linked
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, whenever a country's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
is fluctuating, there is always another that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
badly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
. For that reason, countries and
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companies
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have to
plan for
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negative
situations.

Finally
, in my opinion, neither stepping back nor
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overconsuming
is to resolve the economic problems. To sustain the
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economy
, all sectors(private-state)
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have to
work on their businesses
reasonably
and
continuously
.
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