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Describe your ideal planet you would like to live on.

Describe your ideal planet you would like to live on. 56kPA
Honestly, I would like to live on planet which residents take care of ecology. Now we have problems with trash and gas pollution. Many factories pollute a lot of gas to produce something. Gas is harmful to us and ecology. So, there will be no substance called gas on my planet. Everyone will use public transport or electro cars. Also, there will be new technologies that allow you to fly to other planets at high speed. After all, there will be overpopulation on the main planet. Next thing I want is mutual understanding in society. There will be no minorities, no one will condemn anyone, and strong relations between different nations and peoples. Bad people cause war and good people bring peace to lands. Unfortunately, this planet isn’t real. I believe in people, and I want them to take the right path.
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to produce something.
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is harmful to us and ecology.
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, there will be no substance called
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on my
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. Everyone will
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electro
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Also
, there will be new technologies that
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planets
at high speed.
After all
, there will be overpopulation on the main
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planet
.
Next
thing I want is mutual understanding in society. There will be no minorities, no one will condemn anyone, and strong relations between
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different
nations and
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peoples
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Bad
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people
cause war and
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good
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people
bring peace to lands. Unfortunately, this
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planet
isn’t real. I believe in
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, and I want them to take the right path.
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IELTS essay Describe your ideal planet you would like to live on.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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