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Describe your first teacher

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I will never forget the first time I met my first teacher who encouraged me the most undoubtedly during my life. Talking about his appearance, he was elderly but well-built-man and tall with his long legs. He was a person with round and wrinkled face always gives him a childlike appearance, short greyish hair and friendly brown eyes. In personality, I discovered him as an generous, kindhearted and always cheerful person towards with his little genuines. With having many interests and hobbies, he was keen on storytelling and liked tell interesting fairy tales to us leading little young hearts into goodness as well as being polite other people. He was a fantastic as well as superb teacher I have ever meet so I shall always be thankful for the comfort, advice and support he gave me whenever I needed.
I will never forget the
first
time I met my
first
teacher who encouraged me the most
undoubtedly
during my life. Talking about his appearance, he was elderly
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well-built-
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man
and tall with his long legs. He was a person with round and wrinkled face always gives him a childlike appearance, short
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greyish
hair and friendly brown eyes. In personality, I discovered him as
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an
generous, kindhearted and always cheerful person towards with his
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little
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genuines
. With having
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many
interests and hobbies, he was keen on storytelling and liked
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tell
interesting fairy tales to us leading
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little
young hearts into goodness
as well
as being polite other
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people
. He was a fantastic
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as superb teacher I have ever
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meet
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I shall always be thankful for the comfort, advice and support he gave me whenever I needed.
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IELTS essay Describe your first teacher

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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