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Describe your father in your family

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Hello, today I’m want to talk about my father. His name is Thuan. He is a thirty-nine-year old worker. He’s very handsome with short black hair and black eyes, He has an oval face, his nose is high, and his mouth is small. Talking about his character, he has a good sense of humor, he usually me make laugh when I feel down. What’s more, he’s a punctual person, who is never late. For like, 2 years ago, I came home 55 minutes late from friend’s party, you know? He was very angry, so I haven’t done it again. Besides that, he is a bread winner in my family, he always brings home the bacon. Talking about his hobby, he is really like English who is good at tit, he can speak English fluent. So, he sometimes speaks English with me to improve my English skills. To sum up, I really love my father. Because, my father always was a good role model for me.

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