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English is the subject which I am keen on for most with these practical roles of my life. First of all, English is believed to be far the most popular language all around the world, so learning English well could help me to communicate with the others from many other countries much more easily. Secondly, in the future, while applying for a job, we can be highly regarded than other contestants if we know English well. As a result, we would get a well-paid and stable job with our fluent English learnt from schools. Thirdly, in this subject, we also acknowledge more about the cultures and customs of English-speaking countries in general. Therefore, we can broaden our knowledge about other nations so that it is helpful for our journey to discover the world in the near future. To sum up, English is not only a subject but also a useful tool for almost people, especially students to live as wonderful as we want.
English is the subject which I am keen on for most with these practical roles of my life.
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First of all
, English
is believed
to be far the most popular language all around the world,
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so
learning English well could
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help
me to communicate with the others from
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many
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other
countries much more
easily
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Secondly
, in the future, while applying for a job, we can be
highly
regarded than
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other
contestants if we know English well.
As a result
, we would
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get
a well-paid and stable job with our fluent English
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learnt
from schools.
Thirdly
, in this subject, we
also
acknowledge more about the cultures and customs of English-speaking countries
in general
.
Therefore
, we can broaden our knowledge about
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other
nations
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so
that it is helpful for our journey to discover the world in the near future. To sum up, English is not
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only
a subject
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but
also
a useful tool for almost
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people
,
especially
students to
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live
as wonderful as we want.
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