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DESCRIBE YOUR DIFFICULTY IN LEARNING ENGLISH.

DESCRIBE YOUR DIFFICULTY IN LEARNING ENGLISH. 6ag1B
Nowadays, English is one of the most popular languages in the whole world. In Vietnam, this is the language which is teached in the educational program like a concription. The trouble is learning English in school and learning English in university when you are a student of foreign language faculty too different. I am sophomore studying English language at Thu Dau Mot University (TDMU). While I am studying English, I have some difficulty such as: writing ability is not pretty good; do not have various words source. There are two huge problems that I ought to ameliorate in the near future. I am certain to have variety words source is the most important thing to learn effectively English or any other language. When knowing many words, listening or writing also speaking will be more effortless. When I am listening my test or I am talking to another one, I must understand what the test is about and what they say but I can not understand instead of trying because I do not have enough words to understand. How pity there are. So that I am going to plan my individual plan to improve my words source. Firstly, I will learn new words in Oxford Dictionary from A2 to B2 and I will study about thirty new words a day. Next, Practicing on English application. Finally, I may read all of it before go to bed to remember better. Extremely, I am not good at writing because when I studied English in school, I was not teached how to write an essay or paragraph. When I was feshman at TDMU, I was confused and panicked. At that time, I did not know what to do and did not catch everyone in class. Now, it is a little better than that day but I feel like it is not actually good essay. My words and my grammar often wrong and no logic, incoherent. For example: Instead of ‘I am sophomore at TDMU and I am study English language’ I can correct to ‘I am sophomore studying English at TDMU. ’ I still make it complicated so I try to make it look coherent and more logic. In an essay, words also important no less than grammar if you want to get high score. I realize that the way I use words have many troubles like: repeat one word too much; use wrong synonym; words source still not variety…and so on. Therefore, I have to practice day by day. I will write an essay about any theme and I will check it on ielts69. com. I believe that I will get high score in next test. To improve my writing skill and my words source, I am going to try harder and harder. I think that the more I practice, the more gain I can get. Do not be just study hard, be study effectively.
Nowadays, English is one of the most popular
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languages
in the whole world. In Vietnam, this is the
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language
which is
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teached
in the educational program like a
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concription
. The trouble is learning English in school and learning English in university when you are a student of foreign
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language
faculty too
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. I am sophomore studying English
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language
at Thu
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Dau
Mot University (
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TDMU
). While I am studying English, I have
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some
difficulty such as:
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writing
ability is not pretty
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good
; do not have various words
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source
. There are two huge problems that I ought to ameliorate in the near future.

I am certain to have variety words
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source
is the most
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important
thing to learn
effectively
English or any other
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language
. When knowing
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many
words, listening or
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writing
also
speaking will be more effortless. When I am listening my
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test or
I am talking to another one, I
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must
understand what the
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is about and what they say
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but
I can not understand
instead
of trying
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because
I do not have
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enough
words to understand. How pity there are.
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improve
my words
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source
.
Firstly
, I will learn new words in Oxford Dictionary from A2 to B2 and I will
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study
about thirty new words a day.
Next
, Practicing on English application.
Finally
, I may read all of it
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before
go to bed to remember better.

Extremely
, I am not
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good
at
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writing
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because
when I studied English in school, I was not
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teached
how to write an
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essay
or paragraph. When I was
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feshman
at
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TDMU
, I
was confused
and panicked. At that time, I did not know what to do and did not catch everyone in
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class
.
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Now
, it is a
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little
better than that day
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I feel like it is not actually
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good
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essay
. My words and my grammar
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often
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wrong
and no logic, incoherent.
For example
:
Instead
of ‘I am sophomore at
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TDMU and
I am
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study
English
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language’
I can correct to ‘I am sophomore studying English at
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TDMU
. ’ I
still
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make
it complicated
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I try to
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make
it look coherent and more logic. In an
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, words
also
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important
no less than grammar if you want to
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get
high score. I realize that the way I
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words have
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troubles like: repeat one
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word
too much;
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still
not variety…and
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on.
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, I
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have to
practice day by day. I will write an
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essay
about any theme and I will
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check
it on ielts69.
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com
. I believe that I will
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get
high score in
next
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.

To
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my
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writing
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and my words
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source
, I am going to try harder and harder. I
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think
that the more I practice, the more gain I can
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. Do not be
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, be
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effectively
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IELTS essay DESCRIBE YOUR DIFFICULTY IN LEARNING ENGLISH.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
482 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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