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Describe your curreent thoughts

Describe your curreent thoughts o88YD
Today was saturated day. Previously my day started and I woke up I hit myself. Hit my leg. Due to it, I analyze that I would have unfortunate day. Full of pain and sorrow. Alarm woke me up. This music act like I am hilarious and foolish. This sound make fun of me. He thinks that he superior than me. I will change that soon. First of all, I decided to have some meal. One good thing about today’s day is food. Although food is not the way I escape reality it just stopping time for me. However, principles may sound similar it’s not. Totally not. I had abundance of time and I didn’t know for what I should spend it. As usual. If I could have less time to think and more time t work. That would be divine. Time is priceless. Maybe that’s true or not. I know only one thing for sure. My existence. The fact that I live now. That I feel sorrow, regret, happiness and predilection to kill myself. To hurt my own body but not mind. I crave to protect and save my conscience by sacrificing my own body. Is that equal exchange? From my perspective I am not the only one who does it. Most of us horrified to admit this fact. You should confess to yourself in order to stop it. Either it would persecute you until eternity. As the result you will lose yourself irrevocably. That’s inevitable. Come along with your courage and accept your thoughts. Consequently, they will be superior upon you.
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Today
was saturated
day. Previously my day
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started
and I woke up I hit myself. Hit my leg. Due to it, I analyze that I would have unfortunate day. Full of pain and sorrow. Alarm woke me up. This music act like I am hilarious and foolish. This sound
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
fun of me. He
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
that
It seems that a verb is missing after "he". Please verify.
he
Some adjectives derived from Latin act as both adjective and comparative. In these cases use the collocation 'to'
superior than
me. I will
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change
that
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soon
.
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First of all
, I decided to have
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some
meal. One
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good
thing about
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today
’s day is food. Although food is not the way I escape reality it
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just
stopping
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
for me.
However
, principles may sound similar it’s not.
Totally
not. I had abundance of
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time
and I didn’t know for what I should spend it. As usual. If I could have less
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time
to
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think
and more
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time
t work. That would be divine.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Time
is priceless. Maybe that’s true or not. I know
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only
one thing for sure. My existence. The fact that I
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live
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now
. That I feel sorrow, regret, happiness and predilection to kill myself. To hurt my
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own
body
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but
not mind. I crave to protect and save my conscience by sacrificing my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
body. Is that equal exchange? From my perspective I am not the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
one who does it. Most of us horrified to admit this fact. You should confess to yourself in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
it. Either it would persecute you until eternity.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
the result you will lose yourself
irrevocably
. That’s inevitable.
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Come
along with your courage and accept your thoughts.
Consequently
, they will be superior upon you.
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IELTS essay Describe your curreent thoughts

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
262 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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