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Describe your bad habits

Describe your bad habits 6moeW
As we know, we all have bad habits. If I am not mistaken, in many religions it is said that only God is without sin. I divide bad habits into two types. one of them, a habit that harms others. In this, people are hurting for your bad habits, for example: if you smoke in a public place, throw garbage all over the place, or break public rules. The second type of bad habits is self-harm. If I talk about my bad habits, I think that I am almost the second type. because my laziness until this time has not harmed anyone except myself. If it worries anyone, it is their problem. Аs i said, I'm a little lazy so it turns out discomfort. And I don't like to greet with someone who is not close. If I see someone I don't know well. I pretend not to see him. I’ve said before that I don’t like my neighbors because they think I’m conceited. And my next bad habit hurts my friends. I don't like talking on the phone, so I usually don't answer phone calls.
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IELTS essay Describe your bad habits

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
186 words
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