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Describe the type of food that is most representative of your country and explain why you think that it is representative. Include details and examples to support your explanation. v.1

Describe the type of food that is most representative of your country and explain why you think that it is representative. Include details and examples to support your explanation. v. 1
The business market has grown like never before comprising of manufacturers, suppliers, and vendors in huge masses. In such a scenario, some people believe that in today's tough competition, the organizations must have distinctive products for establishing their mark. This essay completely disagrees with the statement and explains why selling unique items is not the only way to be successful and suggests two ways of running organizations with good profits. To survive in a competitive market, it is required that the demand for the product is taken into consideration. To elaborate, if any item is mostly consumed by the general public over and over, it will naturally increase the demand for a product. Eatables, for instance, are highly consumed, therefore, the business related to food can run profits, even if it is not different from what others are selling. Clearly, it shows that demand can also be a factor for organizations to run successfully. Another contributor to sustaining in a competition is by maintaining quality standards. If a company sells high quality items, consumers will undoubtedly return back due to product satisfaction. Amul organization, for example, is known for the best milk diary, hence, this business has managed to take off with huge gains and maintain for the past 30 years. This proves that the quality supersedes uniqueness. To sum up, even though creative and unique goods are welcomed in a market, it is not the only way to succeed. Addressing people's needs and managing standards are also ways to keep the company's growth.
The business market has grown like never
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before
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comprising of
manufacturers, suppliers, and vendors in huge masses. In such a scenario,
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some
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people
believe that in
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today
's tough competition, the
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organizations
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must
have distinctive
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products
for establishing their mark. This essay completely disagrees with the statement and
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explains
why selling unique items is not the
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only
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way
to be successful and suggests two
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ways
of running
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organizations
with
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good
profits.

To survive in a competitive market, it
is required
that the demand for the
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product
is taken
into consideration. To elaborate, if any item is
mostly
consumed by the
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general public
over and over, it will
naturally
increase the demand for a
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product
. Eatables,
for instance
, are
highly
consumed,
therefore
, the business related to food can run profits, even if it is not
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different
from what others are selling.
Clearly
, it
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shows
that demand can
also
be a factor for
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organizations
to run
successfully
.

Another contributor to sustaining in a competition is by maintaining quality standards. If a
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company
sells high quality items, consumers will
undoubtedly
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return back
due to
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product
satisfaction.
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Amul
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organization
,
for example
,
is known
for the best milk diary,
hence
, this business has managed to take off with huge gains and maintain for the past 30 years. This proves that the quality supersedes uniqueness.

To sum up,
even though
creative and unique
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goods
are welcomed
in a market, it is not the
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only
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way
to succeed. Addressing
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people
's needs and managing standards are
also
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ways
to
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keep
the
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company
's growth.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Describe the type of food that is most representative of your country and explain why you think that it is representative. Include details and examples to support your explanation. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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