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Describe the town or city you live in You should mention some of the important monuments. What changes has your city gone through during the time?

Describe the town or city you live in You should mention some of the important monuments. What changes has your city gone through during the time? 5kk7p
Rasht is a city in north of Iran. When I was a child, I loved this city but now this city has no attraction for me because everything has changed. However, in my opinion, Rasht is still the best city in Iran because in my opinion, people living in Rasht have better culture more than the other. The most famous building in Rasht is the municipal building. It is famous because it was built in the early days of the Pahlavi regime and is considered a historical monument. Although it is a historical building, it is still used as an office building that is being demolished. Rasht used to have a mild climate and it used to rain a lot but now nothing is the same as before and unfortunately even the smell of city has changed. Rasht isn’t a very big city but it has very good location because it is a short distance to important cities such as Masouleh or Anzali. Masoule is one of the most important and beautiful historical cities in the world and Anzali is one of the most commercial ports in Iran, both of which located a short distance from Rasht.
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Rasht
is a city in north of Iran. When I was a child, I
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loved
this city
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but
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now
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this


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city
has no attraction for me
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because
everything has
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changed
.
However
, in my

opinion,
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Rasht
is
still
the best city in Iran
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because
in my opinion,
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people
living in

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Rasht
have better culture more than the other.

The most
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famous
building in
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Rasht
is the municipal building. It is
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famous
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because


it
was built
in the early days of the Pahlavi regime and
is considered
a historical

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monument
. Although it is a historical building, it is
still
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used
as an office
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building


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that
is
being demolished
.

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Rasht
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used
to have a mild climate and it
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used
to rain a lot
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but
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now
nothing is the

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same
as
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before
and unfortunately even the smell of city has
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changed
.

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Rasht
isn’t a
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big
city
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but
it has
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very
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good
location
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because
it is a short

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distance
to
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important
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cities
such as
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Masouleh
or
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Anzali
.

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Masoule
is one of the most
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important
and
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beautiful
historical
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cities
in the world

and
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Anzali
is one of the most commercial ports in Iran, both of which located a

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short
distance from
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Rasht
.
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IELTS essay Describe the town or city you live in You should mention some of the important monuments. What changes has your city gone through during the time?

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