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describe the theory of motivation and show how the theory can be applied to work and sport

describe the theory of motivation and show how the theory can be applied to work and sport pKxA2
Reinforcement theory one of the theories of motivation. It is based on the works of famous russian physiologist Ivan Pavlov, he wrote about behavioral conditioning and proved that behavior is a function of its outcomes. For example, if you will be working on a large scientific project and anybody asked you to stop working at night, you stayed late and made it much earlier than expected. When your scientific supervisor found out, he was in delight and thanked you genuinely. The consequences of your action were positive, and therefore you will have more chances to demonstrate similar behaviors in the future. It means that your initiative was strengthened, in contrast to the situation if your supervisor would have simply kept silent and not expressed the gratitude, that's why gratefulness is always important in human relationships.
Reinforcement theory one of the theories of motivation. It
is based
on the works of
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russian
physiologist Ivan Pavlov, he wrote about behavioral conditioning and proved that behavior is a function of its outcomes.
For example
, if you will be working on a large scientific project and anybody asked you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
working at night, you stayed late and made it much earlier than
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
. When your scientific supervisor found out, he was in delight and thanked you
genuinely
. The consequences of your action were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
, and
therefore
you will have more
Did you mean "changes"?
chances
to demonstrate similar behaviors in the future. It means that your initiative
was strengthened
,
in contrast
to the situation if your supervisor would have
simply
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
silent and not expressed the gratitude, that's why gratefulness is always
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
in human relationships.
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IELTS essay describe the theory of motivation and show how the theory can be applied to work and sport

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